villanelle:
– sembilan belas baris
– 5 stanza tiap stanza 3 baris, kemudian 1 stanza akhir 4 baris
– baris pertama di stanza pertama diulang jadi baris terakhir di stanza kedua dan keempat
– baris terakhir di stanza pertama diulang jadi baris terakhir di stanza ketiga dan kelima
– dua baris “chorus” ini jadi baris kedua dari terakhir dan baris terakhir dari tiap villanelle
– rima aba. diulang sesuai akhir rima baris “chorus” <– ini buat yang supernerd
villainelle, un
make compost out of burning leaves
i’ve been trying to write poetry and failing
life should be like that
we all listen to the rumble of chariots
the empathy of burning windows
make compost out of burning leaves
no-mind in hyper-intellectual tzu-jan
i eat capitalism for breakfast
life should be like that
i need an extra n to spell out your name on wordfeud
places get displaced in memories
make compost out of burning leaves
an addiction to delayed pleasures?
giant eels careening in overtly familiar territory
life should be like that
this is useless
semacam keheningan yang dipaksakan
make compost out of burning leaves
life should be like that
Divagyrations 