villainelle un

villanelle:

– sembilan belas baris

– 5 stanza tiap stanza 3 baris, kemudian 1 stanza akhir 4 baris

– baris pertama di stanza pertama diulang jadi baris terakhir di stanza kedua dan keempat

– baris terakhir di stanza pertama diulang jadi baris terakhir di stanza ketiga dan kelima

– dua baris “chorus” ini jadi baris kedua dari terakhir dan baris terakhir dari tiap villanelle

– rima aba. diulang sesuai akhir rima baris “chorus” <– ini buat yang supernerd

 

 

villainelle, un

make compost out of burning leaves
i’ve been trying to write poetry and failing
life should be like that

we all listen to the rumble of chariots
the empathy of burning windows
make compost out of burning leaves

no-mind in hyper-intellectual tzu-jan
i eat capitalism for breakfast
life should be like that

i need an extra n to spell out your name on wordfeud
places get displaced in memories
make compost out of burning leaves

an addiction to delayed pleasures?
giant eels careening in overtly familiar territory
life should be like that

this is useless
semacam keheningan yang dipaksakan
make compost out of burning leaves
life should be like that

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